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2 Apr 18, 08:18
Emi
Guys, I just posted Track 23 of TWTYH, revised, updated... better than ever. I hope you take a look and enjoy.
3 Apr 18, 18:52
Sparky
"My WHAT?!" Hahaha
3 Apr 18, 18:52
Sparky
Also, poor Alarel! :< I really hope he can fully reunite with Jemena soon
3 Apr 18, 18:52
Sparky
Also Jemena's eyes are freaking gorgeous. I could stare at them all day.
4 Apr 18, 07:34
Emi
Thank you, Sparky!! ^^
7 Apr 18, 22:49
Sparky
I've slowly started re-reading TWTYH (finally had time, lol). I knew I had re-read the first several chapters multiple times over the years, but I was surprised at how much I remembered in order to
7 Apr 18, 22:49
Sparky
tell all the changes that had been made.
7 Apr 18, 22:50
Sparky
The changes are great!
7 Apr 18, 22:51
Sparky
Though the interaction between Yumi and Miyabi at the end of the Stroke of Midnight chapter is missing now, and so there's no longer an explanation for why he has the bow or what it means
8 Apr 18, 05:58
Emi
D'oh! No, I was just stupid and forgot to add the rest of the pages for that chapter. >_< Ugh, I feel stupid! Thanks for bringing that to my attention, Track 5 is complete now so you can see the rest.
8 Apr 18, 05:59
Emi
Really glad you like the changes! If you find any other weirdnesses like that, or typos or anything, PLEASE let me know. I'm fixing to get this printed soon, and I need to make sure everything is as
8 Apr 18, 05:59
Emi
perfect as I can get it beforehand.
8 Apr 18, 18:24
Sparky
Okay, no problem! Glad I could help. I know that it's easy to overlook things when you do so much work. You're not stupid at all. ^^ There was a typo that I noticed, but I can't remember what it was
8 Apr 18, 18:24
Sparky
anymore!
8 Apr 18, 18:24
Sparky
I think there was a double c when there should have been only one....
8 Apr 18, 18:24
Sparky
On a sign
8 Apr 18, 18:25
Sparky
But yeah, I love the changes you've made to some of the dialogue; it really sounds better!
8 Apr 18, 18:26
Sparky
And I like that now she goes home to her parents first after she wakes up the next day from passing out at the concert. Instead of going straight to school
8 Apr 18, 18:27
Sparky
Super excited for it to get printed.
10 Apr 18, 05:29
Emi
^___^ Thanks! I feel a lot better about things too.